Hi,
I have drafted a 5.7.0 release announcement:
http://grass.itc.it/announces/announce_grass570.html
Before linking it to index.html, please review it and
fix it directly in Web-CVS. Native speakers are welcome 
Markus
On Mon, Jun 21, 2004 at 11:42:53AM +0200, Markus Neteler wrote:
Hi,
I have drafted a 5.7.0 release announcement:
http://grass.itc.it/announces/announce_grass570.htmlBefore linking it to index.html, please review it and
fix it directly in Web-CVS. Native speakers are welcome
I briefly browsed it and found no obvious errors.
Good work.
Bernhard
Hi,
I have drafted a 5.7.0 release announcement:
http://grass.itc.it/announces/announce_grass570.htmlBefore linking it to index.html, please review it and
fix it directly in Web-CVS. Native speakers are welcome
Maybe you could mention the new display manager...
Moritz
I have drafted a 5.7.0 release announcement:
http://grass.itc.it/announces/announce_grass570.htmlBefore linking it to index.html, please review it and
fix it directly in Web-CVS. Native speakers are welcome
Hi all,
I've made some changes; let loose the grammar police!
http://freegis.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/web/announces/announce_grass570.html
Three outstanding questions:
a) what to say regarding stability? I put the "technology preview" back
in, but commented it out as it isn't exactly right.. I thought "a first
release", while true, made the meaning a bit too obscure/hidden.
b) should the grass logo be included? It always looks nice.
related: Should there be a flat text version for a press release?
5.3.0 too..
c) I'm still not very happy with the first sentence.
Hamish
c)
What`s wrong with the first sentence? In case, you may add 'milestone', 'top-of-the-edge-technology' or 'border-breaking' - but from my point of view, it is a good first sentence.
b)
When thinking about a press release version, it is helpful to add a few nice colored screenshots in high resolution. Press people love it....
anyway: congratulations, it's good work!
Mit freundlichen Grüßen / With kindest regards
Stefan Paulick
stefan.paulick@urbeli.com
http://www.urbeli.com
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Hamish schrieb:
I have drafted a 5.7.0 release announcement:
http://grass.itc.it/announces/announce_grass570.htmlBefore linking it to index.html, please review it and
fix it directly in Web-CVS. Native speakers are welcomeHi all,
I've made some changes; let loose the grammar police!
http://freegis.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/web/announces/announce_grass570.html
Three outstanding questions:
a) what to say regarding stability? I put the "technology preview" back
in, but commented it out as it isn't exactly right.. I thought "a first
release", while true, made the meaning a bit too obscure/hidden.b) should the grass logo be included? It always looks nice.
related: Should there be a flat text version for a press release?
5.3.0 too..c) I'm still not very happy with the first sentence.
Hamish
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On Thu, Jun 24, 2004 at 08:09:53AM +0200, Stefan Paulick wrote:
Hamish schrieb:
>Three outstanding questions:
>
>a) what to say regarding stability? I put the "technology preview" back
>in, but commented it out as it isn't exactly right.. I thought "a first
>release", while true, made the meaning a bit too obscure/hidden.
We should get people interested in using it while keeping in
mind that things can change (odd number release).
c)
What`s wrong with the first sentence? In case, you may add 'milestone',
'top-of-the-edge-technology' or 'border-breaking' - but from my point of
view, it is a good first sentence.b)
When thinking about a press release version, it is helpful to add a few
nice colored screenshots in high resolution. Press people love it....
Good idea, I have added two screenshots.
Markus