Thanks a lot, Andrea for your feedback. I will make the changes you suggest, as they are good. I have commented on a few below:
Andrea Aime wrote:
Looked a bit into it. Some general feedback:
- the tutorial assumes familarity with SVN, it would be nicer to provide a link to a zipped file with everything needed to setup the tutorial
The config includes a build.xml to create the zip (this is the usual way I distribute my configs), but would the zipped file need to go in SVN to be included in the docs? I need to understand :download:.
- the tutorial uses property files. Developers are comfortable with them, but I think no normal user has ever seen that data source in action. Some explanation about it is probably required
Is there a property file tutorial or documentation for PropertyDataSource in the user or developer manual?
- in gml:id mapping, why OCQL? I've heard of ECQL (extended) but never
about OCQL
Neither have I. This term was used before I joined the project. I have emailed some likely suspects for an explanation.
Finally, I'm a little concerned about the many referencing to your
wiki... as in, how long is that wiki going to be around? Plus, say you
work on new features, how do you ensure the GeoServer 2.0 documentation
points to the state the wiki had for 2.0, and not the current one? (in
other terms, how to ensure the documentation is versioned?)
Your concern is well-justified. All the configuration documentation on the seegrid wiki has to be migrated to the GeoServer user manual. There is no other sensible way to manage it. Now that we have a Hudson for trunk docs, there is no reason not to move it as soon as we have time. In my view, this piece of work is not complete until we have done so.
Thanks again for your extensive and useful feedback.
Kind regards,
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