Good stuff mpg. My two bits:
On 3, it sounds like the code is coming from the libraries, and it
doesn't say what kind of resources. How about:
[3] Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
geospatial
resources -- from low-level source code libraries to high-level server
software, and content from map data to educational curriculum.
On 5, I like the "places" idea, but think there's a temporal issue.
They can't go with us until after they join.
[5] Join us at www.osgeo.org. Together, we'll go places.
Peter
-----Original Message-----
From: Tyler Mitchell (External)
Sent: Friday, May 19, 2006 10:51 AM
To: dev@visibilitycommittee.osgeo.org
Subject: Re: RE: [VisCom] OSGeo Flyer for Where 2.0 - review by Friday
noon PST
I'm liking that. I like the idea of [5], but I think the last part of
it is a registered trademark by several other folks. Go, Michael, go -
you can come up with a better one. Wish we had that inspiring tagline
ready to go.
Maybe the Borg has a motto we can borrow: Assimilate, The Universe Is
Ours... (or maybe just Resistance Is Futile) - 
Tyler
----- Original Message -----
From: "Michael P. Gerlek" <mpg@lizardtech.com>
Date: Friday, May 19, 2006 10:23 am
Subject: RE: [VisCom] OSGeo Flyer for Where 2.0 - review by Friday noon
PST
My tech writer is on vacation today, ad planning on my part. Here's
what I came up with (with the suggestions of Tyler and Chris):[1] The Open Source Geospatial Foundation is a not-for-profit
organization dedicated to the collaborative development of
technologies and data.[2] As the leading promoter of such technologies, we provide
financial, organizational and legal support to the open
source geospatial community.[3] Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources -- Code from low-level libraries to high-level
servers, Content from map data to educational curriculum.[4] We are developers and executives, authors and educators,
users and marketers.[5] Join us at www.osgeo.org. Together, we're going places.
Okay, so #3 and #4 could still use some tweaking. And yeah, that last
sentence still sounds a little overblown. But hey, it's an *ad*,
right...?-mpg
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