Sorry Tyler, I sent in final approval just a minute before I got your
note. So first sentence will include "...collaborative development of
geospatial technologies and data."
This is rev 1.0. I think we've done pretty well in a short timeframe.
I'm sure we'll get some feedback once the ad hits. We can refine for
rev 2.0 or the flyer.
I will also try to get a couple hundred copies of this ad for use as a
handout. Also pdf for the library on the web site.
Peter
-----Original Message-----
From: Tyler Mitchell (External)
Sent: Monday, May 22, 2006 12:02 PM
To: dev@visibilitycommittee.osgeo.org
Subject: Re: [VisCom] OSGeo Ad - last look by noon
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Hi Peter, thanks for the update.
I'd rather not keep loading that first sentence. You could instead get
'geospatial' into the second sentence to side-step the redundancy.
i.e. change:
"Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources..."
to:
"Our geospatial projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources..."
What do you think? Otherwise, I don't mind your change but just feel
the first sentence is pretty long and loaded already.
Tyler
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Thanks Peter, sounds good. I agree, we've got lots done 
Tyler
----- Original Message -----
From: Peter Moran <peter.moran@autodesk.com>
Date: Monday, May 22, 2006 12:25 pm
Subject: RE: [VisCom] OSGeo Ad - last look by noon
Sorry Tyler, I sent in final approval just a minute before I got your
note. So first sentence will include "...collaborative
development of
geospatial technologies and data."
This is rev 1.0. I think we've done pretty well in a short timeframe.
I'm sure we'll get some feedback once the ad hits. We can refine for
rev 2.0 or the flyer.
I will also try to get a couple hundred copies of this ad for use
as a
handout. Also pdf for the library on the web site.
Peter
-----Original Message-----
From: Tyler Mitchell (External)
Sent: Monday, May 22, 2006 12:02 PM
To: dev@visibilitycommittee.osgeo.org
Subject: Re: [VisCom] OSGeo Ad - last look by noon
This web mail client isn't very good - resending last note.
---
Hi Peter, thanks for the update.
I'd rather not keep loading that first sentence. You could
instead get
'geospatial' into the second sentence to side-step the redundancy.
i.e. change:
"Our projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources..."
to:
"Our geospatial projects represent the highest quality of open, shared
resources..."
What do you think? Otherwise, I don't mind your change but just feel
the first sentence is pretty long and loaded already.
Tyler
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